Ami's Hoard

Uhm, I keep wondering if the title becomes a 'curse' ... because for me, this is just, well, nice but nothing special (cringe!).

I admit that the idea of Noah placing an ad to capture Sol's attention was cute and the ending was too. The middle was just okay ... they dated, they spent the weekend, they went to the zoo, they had good sex ... nothing special (cringe!) really happened, sadly. I think the only issue was when Noah was freaking out when Sol asked him to move in. But it was resolved quickly.

This is like watching a very calm lake, no ripples. Again, it's nice but I guess I also want some "oomph" in my story.