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Finder Tolan (Megan Derr)

Finder Tolan - Megan Derr

3.75 stars rounded up

First Reaction
What do you mean it ended there?! What about Seacrist's sacrifice? What about Tolan's possibility of taking Seabolt's mantle? What about Goss? Arghhhhh I needed more chapters!!! *grumble*

But again, Megan Derr's grumpy characters are the best!! Nobody else could write grumpy characters like her. In here, the grumpy character is Tolan. Tolan is a Finder, a third year apprentice, just two years from making journeyman. Except his master is a drunk and fails to teach him. His life changes when a 2-year-old boy comes to his store, wailing for Tolan to find "Secret".

I thought Goss (the kid) was adorable -- and as always, it was fun to watch the grumpy character interact with the love interest. I loved how Shaw Seacrist called Tolan, "my little spark". Yes, I enjoy pet names that are inventive and not resort to the usual "baby" (BLAH!!).

This was entertaining -- and I wished it was longer darn it!