The two MCs 'voices' seem to mesh in, made it difficult for me to make a differentiation. I also disliked the fact that Daniel seemed to keep up bringing up his ex. It got to the point where I thought that Daniel spent more time thinking of Kit rather than interacting with Ronan. For a short story, secondary characters were getting too many pages too, rather than our MCs.
I bought this because I was curious with the MCs, both being in their 50s. But this one was a big MEH for me. Bummer.