2.5 stars
Hmmm ... this felt like reading one of those free online fictions or fan fictions where there were a lot of dialogs but not so much as 'direction' or 'shape' about what the story was trying to say.
At times, it felt refreshing, with the 'let-loose' storytelling and quirky dialogs.... but at other times, I wondered, "what's the point of this? where is this going exactly". The humor sometimes works, sometimes it doesn't. I am not one easily amused with humorous stories, I guess.
So with my mood and the way I felt rather indifferent/meh with this story when I finished it, I have to settled down with 2.5 stars. Bummer.